A Couple of my poems

[nicbrun77]

Here's a couple of my poems. I wrote them when I was going through a really hard time in my marriage before I got divorced. Basically, what I kept hidden from my family and friends, I expressed on paper and though they may not be that good, these poems kept me away from the loony bin (Although, I was going thru depression bouts when I wrote them!) Any feedback would be great.

Come Lie With Me

Come lie with me,

The temptress said to thee;

Come lie with me,

Right here, under the Willow Tree.

Come lie with me,

Your love can set me free.

Come lie with me,

And I will make you see.

Come lie with me,

And Mine is all you'll ever want to be!

The Antidote

Why did my fairytale end?

It wasn't supposed to be like this,

And I don't know if my heart will mend.

It used to be, he looked on me with love and bliss,

Now he's mean and cold, no kind words to send,

ANd I may as well forget a goodnight kiss!

My family says, "Newlyweds need time",

But my patience is wearing thin,

And I know love can't turn on a dime!

It's times like this I wonder, is adultery really a sin?

He used to be a peach, but now he's a lime,

But even so, adultery isn't me, I'll stick to Gin!

I Am The Goddess

I wander to the cliff's edge, high, overlooking the sea,

I step close, but not too close

And I look down to the solitary beach below.

I gaze out to the horizon, where sky and sea meet,

It seems to go on for eternity.

I bounce up on my toes and reach to the sky,

Joy fills my heart and soul on the cliffs, up high.

I feel love and acceptance from the Goddess;

So soothing, like being enwrapped in mother's arms.

I am protected and loved

I am one with the Goddess...

I AM The Goddess!

[smb]

Nice work!

Thanks for posting these.

[Eduardo]

nice work!